Electric department complaining about the regular power cut in your area which will affect your preparation for the exam. And in this letter you have to write
Effect of power cut
What do you want to be done ?
Respect Sir,
I am a resident of New colony, Tohana, writing this letter to grab your attention on the critical condition of the power supply these days which has been confronted by us. Since, past few days the residents of my locality have been facing the issue, especially the scholars who are preparing for their examinations.
I personally experienced this when I had to complete my office assignment, however because of no supply of electricity for about 8 hours, it was impossible for me to accomplish my task. Not at night, but sometimes, in the mornings as well there is no electricity supply. Besides, there is a threat of theft as well in such darkness at streets.
Therefore, I urge you to monitor what is the reason for such unfavourable supplies so that possible solution should be implemented by your department for the public convenience. I believe this matter needs to be addressed as soon as feasible. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Regards
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| 2020-10-28 | sakshi2424 | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03355704698 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0479258207 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704697986577 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.127909107 44.8134815571 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.0 76.5299724578 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 16.8248392259 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218813307491 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886814050089 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724858868827 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136619026706 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547988884153 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 8.37731958763 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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