Some people believe that success in life depends upon hard work and determination while others believe that other factors like money and personal appearance are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Since the time, human has been involved in doing certain kind of jobs measures are taken under consideration to determine the achievements and hence, no one factor can be put at Zenith. Therefore, I would shed light on two distinct aspects:
Industriousness with dedication and monitory gain with personality.
There are multifarious points which can be put forward to exemplify the former factors. Firstly, to compete, for a person to stand in such a competitive era, there is a dire need to indulge in practising working hard if he or she has a desire to achieve the targets. Because of such toil one day that person will be successful and will have a sense of proud and satisfaction in core of the heart.
Augmentation to it, determination ought to be a necessary factor for an individual to stay in the race towards a successful career, especially for the youngsters because in this impressionable age it may be facile for them to get the digress from their goals.Therefore, to avoid such detrimental effects the pupils need to be focus in doing their work so that they will have a key to success.Consequently, by knowing the value of industriousness masses will achieve victory with full determination.
On the stark contrast, financial stability and individuals’ personality contributes in determining the successful career. If a person is able to fulfil all the requirements of the day to day life it means he or she is making enough and is thought to be satisfied which means it should be counted as an accomplishment because she or he has all amenities or can possess a luxurious lifestyle in a healthy as well. Besides, there are myriad of business sectors where the looks of the aspirants matter a lot which would contribute in enhancing their job profile. Ultimately, these people will have a secure future that demonstrates a successful life of such a message.
By the recapitulating, it has become easy to conclude after confabulating both perspectives, regarding measurement of success, that numerous factors are involved in this phenomenon; however according to my experience a hard-working and a dedicated person is able to being successful and only then he or she can earn well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0027100271 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20422400984 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552845528455 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8708024256 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3846153846 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121997071152 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044437636684 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038593623232 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604550055454 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378278910235 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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