People are becoming too dependent on the internet and phone? Is it a positive or negative development?
Due to advancement in technology, it is easy to operate the phone and use the internet. However, these days individuals are much more dependent on the internet as well as phones. In my view, this is a positive step and can bring many benefits.
To begin with, the internet and phone can help in earning money. People can start their channels on applications like YouTube on which they can posts videos on any academic subjects, dance, comedy, or any other topics in which they have specialization and can earn good money by charging learners an appropriate fee. For instance, in the pandemic of Covid-19, many institutes have started teaching online on various applications where many students have taken benefit by studying at home and these institutes have earned a good amount of money. Hence, the internet and smartphones prove to be beneficial as a source of income.
Moreover, financial applications in mobile phones have contributed to the increased usage of phones and the internet. In the past, if a person has to do a payment, he has to go to the bank to transfer money to the other person's bank account for that he has to wait for two or three hours, but now due to advancement in technologies, applications like Google Pay and Paytm has diminished the waiting time, and now payment can be easily transferred by just clicking at the pay button in these applications in mobile phone. For example, I have sent many payments using smart applications on my phone and it just like a little bank on the phone.
In conclusion, phones and the internet are now part of human lives and it brings many benefits such as an income source, and easy payments by using smart applications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: post
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79794520548 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79660771842 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.5433374619 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.363636364 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156309606721 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814100582847 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508216997581 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107923605895 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479350661008 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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