Today people in our society give more importance to Male sports compared to females. This essay will examine reasons and its impact on society.
The main reason behind popularity of male sports is strong physique of men. Therefore, sports like wrestling, Rugby are given importance over tennis because people today enjoy hype. Although, Advertising companies spend large sum of money on male sports like Cricket that is why news channels cover the news of every over of Cricket but female cricket team get less sponsors for there team. Therefore, In monetary terms also females team earn a lakh for a Cricket match in comparison with, 10 lakh for a single match to males.
This surely have a negative impact on society. Firstly, it discourages other women to come forward in sports because they see themselves just as housewives, raising children and taking care of family. The main reason is gender discrimination. If females counterparts get equality in the field of sports as well as others, it will boost the economy as a whole. For instance, there were more sports team coached by females than males. Thus, females just need opportunity and infrastructure to excel in every field.
To conclude, Males dominance in sports do have a negative impact on society. Females should be given equivalent opportunities to rise economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11415525114 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66572041759 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607305936073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4111702257 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263107895905 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920689599086 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543656236237 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165766284313 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266729743383 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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