Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, no one can cast doubts on the fact that the educations and the system thereof has a paramount significance in society, acknowledgment of teachers effort is becoming trendy among peoples. it is my empathetic belief that the teachers should be more appreciated and valued in the present time.
If I were asked to determined a couple of reasons standing behind my points of view, I would strongly suggest that both new methods of study and educations and the new regulations of education system lead student to such a situations. I will manifest my reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
It is without an adumbration of doubts that by passing time, and development of technology, education method, system change fundamentally. by using most up-to-date apparatus such as the Mobile, the Computers, the Tablets, the student's needing to teacher is unnecessary. My personal experience is compelling evidence for what I mean, during the Coronavirus breakthrough, I have attended to an online program at the oxford university, in the biology faculty, as a student, I did not see a teacher to teach a course, everything was provided already by faculty staffs, Hence, students do not appreciate any one at all.
It also goes without declaring that the new roles about teachers does not seems to be strict enough. not only are the appreciation and valuation of teacher effective, but are a illuminating path to young student to learn how to respect their parents, teachers, professors as well. not being a respectful student notwithstanding, the new generation are adamant and rude about your teachers. to be more specific, when I was studying in the Isfahan university of technology, I saw many of student ridicule their mentors and there was no rule to prevent and criticize them inasmuch as the regulation and rules are fruitless and absurd.
It can be summed up in accentuating that any individual should be respectful to teacher, for the teacher as as same as parents makes a better future to next generation. I agree with the idea that the teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays unfortunately. the teachers will be thankful to such a effort, if we were cautious and responsible about their teachers.
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- TOEFL TPO 16 - Integrated Writing Task 88
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.4613686534 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1373.03311258 138% => OK
No of words: 373.0 270.72406181 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07774798928 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07226440719 2.5805825403 119% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 145.348785872 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554959785523 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 419.366225166 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.305333306 49.2860985944 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.285714286 110.228320801 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6428571429 21.698381199 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 7.06452816374 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194395123951 0.272083759551 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787363724665 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121765429278 0.0662205650399 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106612474126 0.162205337803 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803340105272 0.0443174109184 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.3589403974 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 63.6247240618 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.7273730684 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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