You have recently shifted in a rental apartment with your family. However, there are some problems with the apartment.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
Describe the problem
Demand the solution for the problem
Inform him what you will do if the problem is not solved.
Dear Mr. Singh,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the various problems that is being faced by me in the house rented by you.
First, the roof of the drawing room leaks during the rainy weather. Owing to this, a lot of water gets clogged on the floor and all the stuff that is kept in the room such as sofa set and wooden table becomes wet. Second, the glass of one of the windows of the main hall is broken because of which there is a risk to theft as well as chances of injury.
When I rented this house, I was promised a hassle free service. However, so far, this has not happened. Therefore, I would suggest you to solve the above problems on an urgent basis because it is impossible to live in the above circumstances. I am ready to lend the keys to you for 3 or 4 days.
I am highly disappointed and frustrated because of the problems. If these problems still persist, I must say I would need to get the refund of my money and shift to new premises.
I look forward to a prompt reply and urgent action on the above problems.
Yours sincerely,
Abhishek Tyagi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, so, still, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32211538462 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45073029057 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629807692308 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5371569598 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9166666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142970197645 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429247265112 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540781240505 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694689328032 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661939221259 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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