Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting.
In your letter, you should:
give some details about the job
mention how you came across the job opportunity
explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend
Dear john,
I hope you are in best of spirits. It’s been a while since we were last in touch.
Actually, few days ago I came across a job which is available in Roseland restaurant, located just near your city. They are looking for a full time cashier and I am sure you would be interested in this position.
I saw an advertisement in the “The Times” newspaper about this position and I could not wait to write you since you have been looking for a job for quite a long time.
I think this job would be suitable for you for various reasons. Firstly, it offers better salary package. In addition to this, the workers in this job are provided with plethora of facilities such as medical insurance, travel allowance, and bonuses.
You can contact them on number which is available on their website and I hope you would get this job.
Best regards,
Raman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o I came across a job which is available in Roseland restaurant, located just nea...
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Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... near your city. They are looking for a full time cashier and I am sure you would be inte...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: DT_DT[3]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or '“The' is left.
Suggestion: the; “The
...s position. I saw an advertisement in the “The Times” newspaper about this position an...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, look, so, while, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55128205128 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45287605077 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660256410256 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2559185402 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331545497221 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115098969926 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899924088033 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185828608126 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620543295349 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.