The company you work for is planning to provide special training for staff. Your
duty is to find out if the local conference centre has suitable facilities in order
to hold the training.
Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter
• Give some details about the training course
• Describe what kind of equipment you will need for the course
• Ask some questions about the facilities at the conference centre
Dear sir or madam.
My name is Carlos Becerra. I am the human resources manager from Capital One Bank. I am writing to you because my company is currently planning an international trade training program for the sales staff based all around the country.
We will need a conference room for at least two hundred and fifty people, with a large screen, a high tech sound system and of course a good wifi connection. We are going to hold several video conferences with our general manager in Holland.
I saw on your web page that the conference center has accommodation for two hundred people. I need to confirm that information. Finally, I want to know if there is a baseball field in the center, we need to arrange our yearly baseball game which features rookies against veterans. A big tradition in our company and it takes place on the last day of the training program.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Kind Regards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
... name is Carlos Becerra. I am the human resources manager from Capital One Bank. I am wri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, at least, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67484662577 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59753471022 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699386503067 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1378381472 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2727272727 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207949341279 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568377251832 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648044779607 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104482128447 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419432381007 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.