Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some school of thought argue that having a college degree is the most essential way to secure a beneficial employment while others believe that getting internships and useful skills are most vital. Individuals with prior trainings and talents lack foundational knowledge required for being gainfully employed and I believe that being a college graduate is more vital to becoming gainfully employed as it’s a minimum requirement in most good jobs and there is therefore an increased chance and opportunity.
In recent times, the minimum requirement for being gainfully employed by most employers is being a college graduate. This is as a result of so much value and importance placed on graduates and the fact that employers feel graduates acts in a more professional manner and are well exposed. Hence, getting a degree already qualifies you for a good job and for this reason, 90% of individuals especially the youths or even elderly people wish to go to complete college and acquire a degree.
On the other hand, having acquired soft skills like good communication and team management skills and some internships does not guarantee that an individual would have a well paid job because one way or the other, such individual would lack the foundational knowledge necessary for that job which can only be learnt in college. For example an individual with good communication skills and prior knowledge on over-the-counter medications cannot secure a job as a pharmacist because he or she lacks the foundational knowledge.
In conclusion, I believe that acquiring a degree qualification is the most crucial way of becoming gainfully employed as it Is said to be an important prerequisite for high paying jobs and people with skills lacks foundational knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23591549296 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04447582826 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6266666455 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.875 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.125 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220138308185 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102760730611 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554060488731 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140036498125 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258410305297 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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