Over time, as children grow older, the relationship they have with their parents changes.
In your opinion, what role should parents have in their adult children’s lives?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Throughout time, the relationship between parents and children is suffering changes. It's natural, it is not the same level of dependence when you're six years old as when eighteen. Interests aren't the same as well, for which you tend to take your path. Your own decisions and this generates alterations in the oldest relationship you know. The one you hold with your parents.
Throughout our entire life our parents have been beside us. One way or another, even though we're adults and with a family of our own. Our parents must stay present to guide us, the perspective of things whether good or bad. For many people parents are the role model, a lot of doctor's children became doctors, lawyers' children as well, they end up becoming lawyers, just to name a few cases. In my personal opinion, my mother had been always my role model. She did study laws. So, I grew up watching her being a lawyer. Then I became a Lawyer. Despite this, I am no longer five years old and neither lives under my mom's roof. I will be always her little boy, the one that she needs to care for and give the advice to become a better person. Twenty years ago when I just started to write my path she was always supporting me and helping me. I am very proud of whom we are because of my mother's guidance.
Some people say that along with our life we're getting older and learning about everything that surrounds us and our parents have been there since day one.
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Suggestion: aren't
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47908745247 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28323117901 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638783269962 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3045382993 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4444444444 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6111111111 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228713092951 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637455213291 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568364130244 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15117250819 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592227089382 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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