In many countries paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In this modern world, technology has played a vital role in development of a nation. Some countries are even using mobile applications for the payment of various items, and this trend is becoming quite common. I believe that this has both merits as well as demerits.
On the one hand, this technical upgrade has made our life easy. Firstly, paying essential bills such as electricity, water and wi-fi using mobile phone has saved our efforts to stand in a long queue which has helped in saving plenty of time. Secondly, there are many apps which also allow you to shop online for the essential products such as electrical equipment’s, clothes, groceries and that has made very easy to choose the product and get it delivered at home place. Thus, saving the transportation cost associated with it. Lastly, with phone apps it has become very easy to enjoy the benefit of online banking.
On the other hand, this has trend has some disadvantages as well. All mobile phone applications which are installed in the phone, has access to the personal information such as location, gallery, contacts which is a threat for a user. For example, a case has been filed against tik-tok application which sells personal data, because it has access to personal data stored in the phone. Another one is all the phone applications which are developed are not from authentic source, hence it may fail in covering essential security. Exposing all the personal details such as name, card details can prove to be dangerous.
In conclusion, although the mobile apps have made our life easier in many aspects, but still many precautions need to be made in protecting the personal data.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91843971631 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62259156557 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4548882958 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24333282358 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780353889525 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582512002413 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147375158919 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457024671334 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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