The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's habits of tea and coffee buying and drinking in five cities of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make a comparison where possible
The bar chart graph below provides the information about finding of research conducted on Australian people on outlook of tea and coffee taking and buying. In survey five cities were Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart whose percentage of tea and coffee drinking and buying. As an overall trend in all peoples percentages of desire to went cafe to take either tea or coffee greatest in all cities in last four weeks while fresh coffee lowest.
In first catagory fresh coffee, people of Sydney consumed highest percentage of about 44 percent in contrast Brisbane and Adelaide least percent of 34 percent. However, Melbourn and Hobart used 43 and 33 percent respectively.
The second type instant coffee, individuals brought in last four weeks were peaked by Hobart 54 percent and on other hand lowest by Sydney about 45 percent. While in case of Melbourne, Brisbane and Adelaide last month results were 47, 54 and 50 percent.
In third kind which is to went to outdoor places such as cafe to take tea or coffee, the Melbourne and Hobart people percentages were almost 63 percent topped with comparison to all other catagories and with other cities peoples. In comparison Adelaide people went outside coffee and tea shops slightly lesser then instant coffee and lowest in people of other cities. Although, Sudney and Brisbane people attitude reported 62 and 55 percent in last four weeks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'consumed the highest'.
Suggestion: consumed the highest
...catagory fresh coffee, people of Sydney consumed highest percentage of about 44 percent in contr...
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Line 4, column 233, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...ories and with other cities peoples. In comparison Adelaide people went outside coffee and...
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Line 4, column 303, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lesser than'?
Suggestion: lesser than
...t outside coffee and tea shops slightly lesser then instant coffee and lowest in people of ...
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Line 4, column 310, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...de coffee and tea shops slightly lesser then instant coffee and lowest in people of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, second, so, then, third, while, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06926406926 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47036368296 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519480519481 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1411372758 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.1 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197746469731 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891276842234 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691680576142 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117647146592 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930338782539 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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