Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?
There are many parents who reckon it is good for kids to mature in the city, while there are others who reckon that living in the surroundings is more useful for them. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of both locations.
Actually, there are some positives side to live in the cities or landscape. On the one hand, the kids stay in the cities have the opportunity to recognise the new culture of other people. Moreover, they have a chance to learn more and explore themselves by searching for talent in the big community. On the other hand, the children which are living in a small town can interest and breathe clean air among the trees and fields. Whereas, they can play in the natural gardens away from the cities noises and pollutions.
On the contrary, there are negatives side to live in the city or countryside. Firstly, securities in big cities are not enough to control all places. So the parents must save their youngsters. For example, when you send your teenager to buy something from the market, you need to flow him until come back. Secondly, the facilities shortage in the countryside may affect the mentalities of talented children. For example, the lack of development in a small town should not encourage school students to improve themselves.
In conclusion, there are several advantages and disadvantages to both places. Finally, the decision depends on wide varieties and unlimited reasons but we can choose the best from each side and accept it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'facilities'' or 'facility's'?
Suggestion: facilities'; facility's
...flow him until come back. Secondly, the facilities shortage in the countryside may affect ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, firstly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83070866142 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59978787938 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4591529757 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222409017799 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618148994838 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469717813679 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120370269124 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409537062816 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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