You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
• say which advertisement you are answering
• describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
• explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with reference to an advertisement on The Daily Times Newspaper dated on 15th November for the role of academic instructor at a local community college.
I would prefer to tutor 2 subjects that is Marketing and General Awareness from the list of courses. The marketing course will cover the basics of retail and digital marketing along with few case studies with possible real time problems to analyze the students understanding. As general awareness is a broad topic, it is restricted to local and national current affairs, modern history.
With post graduate diploma in Marketing and few years as a Marketing head for a retail chain in the USA, I believe I have some experiences to share which could aid them in future and knowledge to impart in the stream of marketing. Additionally, general awareness is a topic I have secured 88% recently for a state administrator role, making it a top 5 score outlines my awareness of the subject.
I hope my experience and knowledge would tilt your preference to favor my application.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Mihira Mupp
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, of course, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00526315789 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93927931318 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642105263158 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9513704136 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140949014257 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517513522307 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398393749802 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771638782857 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439316342157 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.