You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
say which advertisement you are answering
describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this in response to your advertisement in newspaper. I read that your institution is looking for a teacher and I think I might be a perfect for this role.
Since you have been looking for various people to fulfill various positions. I would like to apply for economics teacher job which is schedule to begin at 9:00 pm from next week. The course I would like to teach will be about microeconomics where student will get to learn about market demand and supply. And, they can also able to understand how individual market works.
While I Know I might not be the only one who apply for this occupation but I think I might be the perfect fit. I did Master degree in economics from university of british Columbia and worked on various project under different companies. I have 3 year teaching experience with another night college but unfortunately it is closed now and I have to look for new part-time job during night to meet up my expenses.
I hope you will consider me for this posting. I attached my résumé with this letter you can contact me anytime on my cell which is mentioned on my résumé.
Your sincerely
Manveer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... think I might be the perfect fit. I did Master degree in economics from universi...
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...during night to meet up my expenses. I hope you will consider me for this post...
^
Line 6, column 47, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you will consider me for this posting. I attached my résumé with this letter you...
^
Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...entioned on my résumé. Your sincerely Manveer
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6231884058 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66966679936 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1553840674 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.75 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269996682552 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856318670554 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497158183342 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149914963615 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236226751018 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.