Many people complain about commercial advertisements and their influence on children. Should it be controlled by the government? What are the possible effects on children?
These days advertisements play a major role to influence people to buy the stuff what they show. Sometime the item is a useful, however some are not beneficial for health. A lot of individuals have concern nowadays about the effect of commercial over the children and few also want it to control by government. In my opinion, I am totally agreed that it should be regulated by government bodies. The possible effect could be increased in their demand to buy stuff that might not good for health for instance:- alcohol, cigarette etc by watching their promotion continuously on tevelivison.
To begin with, commercials are the topmost strategies of companies to sell their products. Because of this occasionally they mislead public by hiding demerits of their products just to sell them. Children who usually watch television regularly, usually get encouraged by this publicity and love to buy the unwanted commodity. So the authorities need to create a regulatory body who need to watch these and can approve which advertisement can be on-screen or any changes need before approval.
Adding in to it, these unrolled advertisements has lots of negative impact on adolescents. Firstly, their has been seen a rise in consumption of alcohol and tobacco due to this endorsements. Children just saw how this stuff is being used by actors, by following there footsteps they are tempted to buy these objects without even considering its downside effect on their health. Secondly, the problem of eating disorder and lack of nutrition in kids is also a drastic result of these commercials. As they saw fast food restaurant broadcasting about their products. They got influenced and love to buy them. And by eating them they are just playing with their health.
In conclusion, despite of having some cons there are some pros, such as public announcement on television can aware kids about what's happening in our locality. Some hygiene advertisement can also lead to adoption of good life style in the. But still these need to be looked up by government before going on-air.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09970674487 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88256220538 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577712609971 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3585146967 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5263157895 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42105263158 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284469072101 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737851512908 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543802381762 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164259220231 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092515550129 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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