In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because the will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Today, in the modern world, we are more concerned about saving the earth planed by doing something eco. If we use more papers on invaluable things, it is defined that we are one step backward to our goal-to save the earth planed. The paper, which made from the tree. The tree helps us to inhale fresh air and sustain the ecosystem. If there is less tree, it means we are not going to live on this planet long after. Hence, I agree with the statement that, in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books not only because we will be able to read everything we want online without paying, but also we are smart human beings who wanted to live longer on this planet. I have two statements to prove why I agree with the question.
First of all, as I mentioned earlier in the paragraph, the tree is the raw material of paper. Therefore, to save more trees, we have to use less paper. For example, the company I work for defined its goal that 10 years later, we are not going to use paper anymore. This decision is the most eco and futuristic.
Secondly, paying the money for a paper that ruining our future life is the worst choice. For instance, when I was younger, my grandparents used to read a newspaper daily. And after the newspaper gets old, it is used for nothing and goes to the trashcan. But today, I am using the internet, webs to read the news that I wanted free and trash-less.
In sum, some might say that the printed papers are a valuable source of news and information, but in the future, we can get reliable news from a reliable sources. Also, excluding the printing and paper cost, the new is totally free. Henceforth, I am more than a hundred percent sure that, in the future, people will prefer paper-less books and news which is free!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42024539877 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32877043555 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5936886168 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0555555556 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215578676328 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563181193177 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102211610347 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110686193358 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973052973383 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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