Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small group for a long time is more important than the ability to make friends easily.
It has been long discussed whether or not the ability to maintain friendships with a small group for a long time is more important than the ability to make friends easily. Some people may agree with this view; however, in my opinion, it is crucially important for people to have the ability to make friends easily, and following are reasons for my stance on this subject.
First and foremost, the ability to make a lot of friends can help people adapt to the environment of the future easily. Since they are different types of personality in the world, it is a beneficial way for people to have the capability to communicate with diverse types of people. Take my personal experience for example, one of my friends, Alex, is an outgoing person. Therefore, he makes lots of friends during his study at university. By having a large social network, he finds a job easily than others after he graduates.
In addition, people who make friends easily can promote their social ability. According to the latest survey conducted by the young people magazine ,95 percent of people think that chatting with different types of people can enhance their ability to express themselves. For instance, people with different personalities have different thinking patterns. As a result, we need to have a good social ability skills to get along with others.
To sum up, judging from the points elaborated in the previous paragraphs. I would like to reiterate my standpoint that having the ability to make friends is more important than maintaining friendships with small groups. After all, it is an effective way for people to enhance their social circle. The more types of friends the people make, the better their life will become.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement University students should be required to attend classes 70
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The ability to maintain friendships with a small group for a long time is more important than the ability to make friends easily 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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...reasons for my stance on this subject. First and foremost, the ability to make ...
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...easily than others after he graduates. In addition, people who make friends eas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, therefore, after all, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93103448276 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62697974719 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524137931034 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4501436252 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390530929787 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141325887963 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158580088549 0.0737576698707 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275830346007 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149990757299 0.0645574589148 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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