The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organization. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Multinational organizations can be found in most major cities around the world these days. Working for a multinational company is thought by many to the most effective way to learn about different cultures. Although working for such a company provides the opportunity to mix with people from various cultural backgrounds, I would argue that this is not necessarily the best way to learn about cultures.
No doubt working for a multinational organization will enhance their understanding of other cultures for some people. The first reason is that in a multinational organization, one can learn about other countries' customs and traditions by mixing with people from a different background who work in the company or in liaising with colleagues abroad. Exposure to other languages is also likely, something that gives a much greater understanding of culture. There may also be the chance to relocate to work in another country, which would mean complete immersion in that culture.
However, there are several reasons that it is not necessarily the best way. Firstly, there is no guarantee that you will be exposed to other cultures since it depends on your positions within the company. Not all employees have roles where they regularly mix with other cultures. There are also other excellent ways to achieve such a goal; many people these days travel the world, and this is an opportunity to meet and spend time with people from other countries. It is also possible to do voluntary work with organizations and charities that work in other countries, something that would mean you meet a mix of people rather than just those who work in Companies.
In conclusion, despite the potential ways working for a multinational company can result in contact with people from other cultures, I believe that it cannot be assumed it is the best way as there are other options to do this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: There are other; There are also
...they regularly mix with other cultures. There are also other excellent ways to achieve such a goal; ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0578778135 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85776667483 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491961414791 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8702144046 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354467618249 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137495206056 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876196212618 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242986623402 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021282630532 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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