The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Authority in a society is body that governs the affairs of the society, they are in control of what goes and comes in the society. This authority can also be called the government. The prompt recommends that development occurs when the people in the society are able to ask reasons for specific judgments,verdict and laws given by the 'ruling power'. In my opinion I strongly agree with this suggestion and argue that for a society to go forward and remain peaceful, the people should be able to question the authority for this two reasons.
To begin, research has seen to it that the most peaceful type of government is democracy. Democracy is the government of the people for the people and by the people. Democracy system of government gives the people power to question authority. In this system people are not under a dictator. A society where the the authority can be questioned practices democracy. For instance, in the 1960s through the 1990s, Nigeria experienced military system of government. During this period, the country was ruled by Military Head of states, these Head of States were typical dictators. During this period, the people in the country could not question the authorities of the rulers. Any attempt to question their authority leads to death, there was massive blood shed during this period. The dictators misbehaved a lot, looted public funds and got away with it. Nobody could question their authorities. It was seen that during this period Nigeria experienced the highest Mortality and corruption, development was very slow. It is of no doubt that this dictatorship system led to great disarray of their then 'community'. The above example shows how disastrous a society can be if the authorities can not be questioned.
Further, even if we assume that a society can be good without people questioning the authorities, we should agree that freedom is the most beautiful thing ever, freedom births peace. People should have freedom of speech, this includes questioning the ruling body. nothing makes a man happy than when he is allowed to say his mind, at this he can defend himself and also accuse defaulters. for instance, an accountant working in a big firm, she goes to work daily to realize that the the right figures she recorded are been altered by her direct boss, and in the constitution of the firm, an inferior officer is not allowed to question the verdicts of a superior officer, this is very detrimental to the well-being of the organization because the organization will some day crumble. When people are allowed to question or object the verdicts of the authorities, there will be transparency and justice, the organization will move perfectly and bad leaders will easily be fished out. In west Africa the military system is very corrupt because an inferior officer can not question the authorities of the superior officer, the very senior officers loots funds sent to the entire military, this is one of the major cause of the underdevelopment of their military system which leads to increase in terrorism in that region.
Of course, some argue that if many people in a society are allowed to question the authority, there will be disrespect. They also argue that people in this kind of society will not obey rules and order set by the authorities. however, I do not see questioning as disrespect, questions can come politely and it sheds more light on things that are unknown, questioning authority is no excuse to break laws. I see authority questioning as a good way to enhance the well-being of a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, kind of, no doubt, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2962.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 599.0 442.535393258 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9449081803 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94716853372 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78489227517 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44407345576 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 929.7 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.4776388274 60.3974514979 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3928571429 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409759976443 0.243740707755 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116759962011 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913998882126 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274059009874 0.150359130593 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073902396262 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.