It is inevitable that as technology develops so traditional cultures must be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an arguments that techonolgy can leads to loss of culture traditional cultures. I agree with this assertion and I would argue that technology is changing every aspect of our lives.
Firstly, teachonology make many traditional ways of life obsolete. Nowadays, new techonologies have become an integral part of our lives and make the living more easy and convenient. For example, in the past people had to produce many of their needs such as food and cloths by themselves. However, these days, thanks to the modern machinery and massive production, life have become easier and people are able to spend their time on other activities like education and leisures. So all facilities and aminities caused by technologies contribute to the loosing many traditional skills like weaving and pottery. Secondy, when it comes to social life, technology have various effects on people interactions. In today’s time, unfortunately, people are more engrossed by social media paltforms like Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and so on rather than talking conservation with their family. People seat each other but they are busy with their smartphones. another example is that ,before technological boom, children are used to play outdoors, socializing with their friends and family. But now most of the kids have video games and smartphones in hand, in this way they lost sight of values and beliefes that the older generation had while growing up.
To sum up, it is clear that technology development have brought many changes traditional ways of life that could be bothe positive and negative. It is up to us to be aware of themselves and our actions so we can use technology advancements for our upliftment rather than our downfall.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, while, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19642857143 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87377081088 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610714285714 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6864074452 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189950644893 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672356761544 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613797185136 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15251722289 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376331041966 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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