getting promotions are one of the biggest motivations for hard work in the modern workplace. Why are people so driven to receive promotions? what other factors motivate people to work hard?
To perform well in a job, people should be motivated. One of these effective ways to keep them motivated is promotions. In this essay, I would argue the reasons why people are so driven to receive promotions and other ways that can be used to improve the performance of workers at work.
To begin with, for the majority of the people, getting a promotion is the first motivation to put all their efforts into their work. The primary reason for this is that everyone loves to be prized. When our efforts are recognized by others we try harder to enhance our performance. Therefore, promotion is a sign that the efforts of employees are appreciated and make them feel that they are valued.
However, there are several ways to motivate ways. First of them can be autonomy and trust. Employees always are irritated by the supervisors who tell them regularly what to do. If they are trusted to give an opportunity to work on their own. They not only stay motivated but also they can flourish in their roles. The second motivation reason could be a better work-life balance. In today’s competitive environments some employers may have unrealistic expectations from their workers and may force them to work overtime. This issue can have destructive effects on their personal life and they may lose their motivation in a long run. So most of the employees are looking forward to working for the companies that provide more flexible working hours that allow them to get enough time to spend with their families.
In conclusion, the most important reason why employees are motivated by promotions is that brings them a sense of recognition. Offering greater work-life balance and authority and showing trust in them are two important factors that could contribute to improving employees’ motivation.
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...em can be autonomy and trust. Employees always are irritated by the supervisors who tell t...
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...ors who tell them regularly what to do. If they are trusted to give an opportunity...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99003322259 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74149393743 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7268455814 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4444444444 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288562318034 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873945743089 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671064734386 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184730997435 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561700003407 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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