One of the most conspicuous trend seen in today's world is the colossal upsurge of marriage between individuals before reaching a certain age or completing studies and establishing a job. The idea of getting married prior to building their carrier is widely debated. My view coincide with this notion and i will explain why in the following paragraphs.
There are a myriad of arguments n favor of my stance. The preponderant seen in light is that due to their young age they will lack the expertise in making decision and will struggle to cope with the several situation that married life will entail upon them. This will result in the soar of conflict and quarrels between them. Needless to say, with so many problems to deal with in an early age, the relationship between each other will only deteriorate, contributing to an unhappy life.
Another pivotal overt facet of this argument is that, they will lack financial hardship with an unestablished carrier. The couple will not be able to fulfil their basic requirements, be it financial or psychological. Getting married prior to completing studies will force them to quit it and search for jobs to keep up with the daily amenities and to tie the both ends.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the drawbacks of getting married earlier without completing one’s studies and developing their career are indeed too dire to ignore. In my opinion, people should be aware of repercussion before getting married.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...he following paragraphs. There are a myriad of arguments n favor of my stance. The ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'several situations'.
Suggestion: several situations
...sion and will struggle to cope with the several situation that married life will entail upon them...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.988 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72477522009 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9424761956 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.916666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16661579653 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064565138866 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744195485838 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124094517454 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723829054495 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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