The university now offer the course on the internet so their people can study online is this positive or negative development.
Study is important for everyone nowadays.Without education person cannot achieve any goal in life.However, if some university offer that they can study online even though there might be some negative effects, my opinion supports the positive.
Some university nowadays offer that student can do online study. Firstly, when people cannot go to university they can study on the internet as well as they can save their time because when they travel from home to university they disturb from traffic and crowd. Moreover some masses are doing jobs. If they have not time for go to university. It beneficial for them because they are busy in work and when they have some time they can do their course study by online opportunity. For instance, during corona virus whole world suffered from dangerous disease . Nobody could go to college because all college and university had closed for 4 to 5 months. All universities offered to students that they can study on the internet.
However , it is negative effects on some people who study on the internet because they cannot Concentrate on studies on the online course. Secondly, when some students/people study in university they easily understand course and when people do online. They might not understand some problem. Furthermore, when individuals are staying at home they cannot study at home because they have a lot of work regarding home. So that it not superior for people. When university offered that they will could not class on the internet some people thought that it not important for them. As in, during the corona virus some people do study on the internet but most students don’t do education online.
To conclude, internet study has many positive effects because people get more benefit it depend on people that they do study or not. People should that they do not waste tine because education plays an internet role in everyones life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05079365079 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58349414141 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469841269841 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.7936443536 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3888888889 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296777888294 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118025946861 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929851255495 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204433667795 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226360816712 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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