Dear Georgy,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I received your letter seeking career advice from me regarding the Nursing course in Amrita university.
As you are aware, I completed Masters in Nursing from Amrita university and I took cardiothoracic Nursing as major subject for my final year. Although I received scholarship from many universities, I chose Amrita as they offer best curriculum in India for cardiothoracic Nursing course.
I would definitely recommend you to join the university for the same reason as I know you are interested in Cardiothoracic Nursing. In addition to this, they have a huge multi-specialty hospital within the campus which is an added benefit for any nursing student as you will get wide range of clinical experience.
If you are planning to apply in this university, I would recommend you to write the merit exam they are offering as you might end up receiving a full scholarship, like I did. Not only this, merit students, also gets to apply for employment selection in campus at the end of the course.
If you require any further details, do write to me. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
With regards,
Sruthy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97989949749 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93606699201 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603015075377 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3521136312 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294095119154 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102114990407 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578964581652 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154647257449 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568220958437 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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