Describe an electronic item that is important to you
We' re living in 4.0 era, when the need of using of people increase, smartphone plays an important role in today's life. Not only me but also everyone in the world admit that people cannot live without mobile phones.
Smartphone is very convenient for all of us who using it with the Internet. This is one of the most easiest and effective device to get new information in the world. You can get the news immediately because mobile phones is updated continiously every day without paying money on megazines or newspapers. Also if you do not know the address and how to get in that destination, smartphone will find the shortest way for you to go there. An additional advantage of smartphone is learning English and discovering the world. There are thousand of videos about it for you to know more about, it has an app called "Cake" where you can exchange with other people to learn more about new words or test your speaking which is good or not. If you have a bad day or you want to find something to entertain, smartphone is definitely the best choice for you. You can listen to music, watch some funny videos or play games.
On the other hand, the negative sides of this trend should not be ignored. Try not to depend on smartphone too much. If not you can use it under control which affect your health. Another negative aspect of smartphone is relationship. You will not have more friends or show your feelings to another people, which means you will be isolated.
In conclusion, using smartphone have both benefits and drawbacks, it is all depend on how people using it. However, in my opinion, smartphone is indispensable part in today's life, and it is very important to me to have a mobile phones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 96, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'easiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: easiest
...t with the Internet. This is one of the most easiest and effective device to get new informa...
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Line 2, column 305, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...aying money on megazines or newspapers. Also if you do not know the address and how ...
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Line 2, column 531, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...sh and discovering the world. There are thousand of videos about it for you to know more...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y not to depend on smartphone too much. If not you can use it under control which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 305.0 196.424390244 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6262295082 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6567494531 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 106.607317073 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537704918033 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 283.868780488 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4199409487 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177801068044 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542200174928 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509477259217 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933319051288 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481081793879 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.