It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that people getting married before finish school or getting a job is becoming a problem in our living. Personally speaking, I firmly agree that people can be married before finish school or getting a job, which can be supported by the reason as follows.
The first and the most important reason for my belief is that getting married early is much easier to get more power in their school or job, to be more specific, people always want to have a better life for themself or their family, so after they married, they will be more powerful for their study or their work, because they want to improve themself to get more income to get the better life. This can be established by recent research by Oxford University, which stated that 80% of people believe if their child wants to marry before finish school or getting a job they won't be angry.
On the other hand, the second reason for this argument is that when young people getting married, they will know they have to be responsible person, to illustrate, most of the undergraduate students are living with their parent and they don't have to worry about any money or housework such as cleaning or buying some insurance, according to the annual report the Australian government, more than 76% people believe that young people will learn how to take responsibility for a family after marriage.
With all the points above, the conclusion can be made that getting married at teenage is a benefit for human improve their soul.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s are living with their parent and they dont have to worry about any money or housew...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70610687023 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38691255662 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519083969466 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.5024630542 210% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.966225165 50.4703680194 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 205.5 104.977214359 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.6666666667 20.9669160288 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238451055494 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178728555867 0.0925447433944 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109231999583 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172098949956 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131197159765 0.0609392437508 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 12.6369458128 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.9458128079 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.93 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.94827586207 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.3980295567 185% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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