There is an opinion held by a section of the society that money is the main factor which judge the success of a business. Although, money is a true indicator of success, I belive that there are other ways through which success can be measured.
On the one hand, today the motive of every company in the world is to make huge profits. This is because the future of the company depends on this profit they make. If the profit of a company is low, it will lead to many problems, likewise, if the profit is high it will have huge benefits. For example, a company will receive good investments if their profits are high. So, it is evident that money is an indicator of the success if the business.
On the other hand, I believe that there are other important indicators too. Firstly comes job satisfaction of employees. There is no meaning in the success of a company if its employees are not satisfied in their jobs. This is because, only the happy workers can contribute healthy benefits to a company. To be more precise, they will work hard to their full potential if their work palce is rewarding. The multi-billion dollar compang Amazon is shining example for this. Another indicator of success is customer satisfaction. There are many companies in the world which has the respect and trust of their customers, as a result these people remain loyal to the company. Without trust, it is impossible to run a business.
In conclusion, although money is the most important way to determine the effectiveness of a business, other methods are also play an important role. By following the above mentioned protocols economy would have a bright future internationally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7785467128 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72246443467 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519031141869 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6446547552 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7222222222 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24238243598 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756313503174 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979482073193 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159665335328 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112014812607 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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