Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Environmental issues are the biggest and most important issues for our generation as well as for future generation. Some people believe that loss of species of plants and animals are important because it damage our eco system but other say that there are some other issues such as pollution, increase in sea level, soil degradation, etc. I would like to give my opinion in conclusion.
To begin with, advancement in technology, increase in population, rise in construction field are the main reason for damage of environment. The population of world is increasing, to fulfill the residence for all people, due to this construction activity is also increasing. Deforestation is the reason of all these activities. Thus, there is no place for animals to survive and they died. “White tiger” is only available in Asia and with the time, the numbers of white tiger had been decreased. In future, people can see only in zoo if tiger will survive. Sandal wood is one of them that will be lost in future.
Apart from different species pollution is also biggest problem. World is facing air pollution, water pollution, noise pollution, etc. In addition, air is much polluted that visibility is decreased and people have to survive asthma. Not only air pollution but also public is survived from noise pollution and faced hearing loss. Moreover, we will not be able to grow crops in future because there is no nutrients and microorganisms available in soil. In contrast, temperature is rising of glob thus, ice is melting and sea level is increasing.
I believe that, all environmental problems are important whether it is related to species or it related to air, water. We have to stop debating on problems and start to find solution so we can save our planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'damages'?
Suggestion: damages
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Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...bers of white tiger had been decreased. In future, people can see only in zoo if tiger wi...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'also the biggest'.
Suggestion: also the biggest
...art from different species pollution is also biggest problem. World is facing air pollution,...
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Message: Did you mean 'there are no nutrients'?
Suggestion: there are no nutrients
...be able to grow crops in future because there is no nutrients and microorganisms available in soil. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, apart from, as for, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9527027027 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83818369836 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550675675676 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.491929901 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4444444444 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232268195187 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578348080295 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680184034714 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140582124101 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093630006331 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.