The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The diagram illustrates the outcome of a survey about how often people in 5 Australian cities purchased and drank coffee and tea. Overall, the trend of people hanging out for a coffee or tea stood at top in the last 4 years.
Looking at the information in more detail, in terms of fresh coffee. Sydney was the highest proportion among 5 cities, accounting for nearly 45%. Following by that, around two fifth people in Melbourne and Hobart purchased original coffee while the two remaining cities which were Brisbane and Adelaide were the lowest percentage at below 35%. In addition, instant coffee output's percent were fluctuated slightly among these five cities. The proportion of Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart were below a half while Brisbane accounted for just over 50%. Furthermore, Hobart's ratio was the highest on purchasing instant coffee.
What's more, Australian people has a tendency to go out for a coffee and tea over the 4-year period. Melbourne took the lead as regard the highest percentage on this trend. It is followed by Hobart which stood at 62%, while the number of Sydney was slightly less (just 2%). By contrast, figure for the remaining cities remained much lower, ranging from 50% to 55% each city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
... highest on purchasing instant coffee. Whats more, Australian people has a tendency ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95609756098 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49699879344 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.698314333 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197437885615 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726047712453 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931063646562 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162780587657 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953268429899 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.