Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is said that famous people`s salary is extremely high, whereas the fact whether they deserve it or not is not taken into consideration. I strongly agree with this statement and in this essay I am going to support my opinion presenting reasons and examples.
The majority of people assume that it is unfair towards to salary which well-known people receive after being hired or starred. Despite of the fact that necessary professions like nurses and teachers get lower income, these jobs worth of paying as much as possible because these jobs demand hard work, high professional skills and brilliant experience. Similarly, to become a star, you do not have to study at a higher education institution since it is enough to have inborn talent and ameliorate it. But, people who have chosen jobs like doctors or teachers have to acquire necessary skills and qualification by getting diploma, in addition in such institutions university pays are always higher rather that in others.
It is true that celebrities earn plenty amount of money and they can afford living in luxurious houses and buying expensive cars. Most of them waste their money on nonsense, parties and even get into bad habits. However, still children admire and want to be icon, dreaming to have “celebrity lifestyle”. They do not choose professions like plumbers, carpenters, drivers or even teachers as these jobs are low paid.
In conclusion, I am still certain that there must be justice and fairness relating income of certain professions. If only celebrities earn less, more people would be able to provide themselves a good living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 651, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'institutions'' or 'institution's'?
Suggestion: institutions'; institution's
...by getting diploma, in addition in such institutions university pays are always higher rathe...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...nty amount of money and they can afford living in luxurious houses and buying expensiv...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, so, still, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1358490566 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77874247716 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4920171475 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.416666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0726463132751 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261828827847 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214585976518 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0415041846632 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250373286641 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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