Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
It is supposed that society tends to have no function if everything can be decided easily without any rules by the public. I entirely support that a variety of regulations are indispensable in a civil society.
The first reason why communities need to rely on rules and laws is to avoid doing unethical things to human beings. To illustrate, there are a large number of things which able to put people off the right path, especially the young if the community is likely to have no rules and laws. Children, for example, can steal precise items, fight with their friends, or even become murder due to their misunderstanding about education. As a result, it is essential for the authorities to set strict regulations in order to bind all people living in a controllable society.
In addition, having regulations can evidently make society become more sustainable in all sorts of fields. From an education perspective, children have to learn a host of different subjects in educational institutions that need to be followed by schooling rules, this can create a right cognition for children as they are the youngest generation of a nation. From a business perspective, if the government is unlikely to apply laws on business, wrongdoers can steal secret companies’ strategy giving other ones with a bad aim. Hence, this can easily make unfair competition among companies.
To sum up, making regulations plays a critical role in keeping a developing society and people cannot do anything if they do not follow the government’s laws. I completely agree with this view for a number of reasons which are mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... human beings. To illustrate, there are a large number of things which able to put people off the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, for example, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05576208178 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99999769673 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3174542882 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146655166763 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511282000102 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596076162312 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976697521346 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618531480605 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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