Describe the bar chart
The bar chart shows the duration of leisure time in hours enjoyed by men and women of varying employment status between the year 1998 to 1999. It is shown that the unemployed and retired men and women had the highest duration of leisure time in hours.
Among the fully employed, the males had more time for leisure activities compared to the females while among the part time employees, the female had more leisure and the males had none. The unemployed and the retired had seemingly equal duration of leisure time in hours with the males having more time than the females. The housewives were noticed to have more leisure time than the employed either part time or fully employed however lesser than that of the unemployed and retired females.
In the female group, it is seen that the unemployed and retired females had more leisure time of about 80 hours in a week while the unemployed part time and full-time females had lesser time i.e. less than 40 hours in a week. Amidst the male group, the unemployed and the retired had more leisure time of about 90 hours in a week while males that are fully employed had less than 60 hours of leisure time in a week.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...compared to the females while among the part time employees, the female had more leisure ...
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Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e leisure time than the employed either part time or fully employed however lesser than t...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...80 hours in a week while the unemployed part time and full-time females had lesser time i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56937799043 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18270988242 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.368421052632 0.547539520022 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.5267584331 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.428571429 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0269179322609 0.215688989381 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254797855162 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624124732702 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0391045976315 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553022523215 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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