You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
Dear Mr. Efron,
I am Harbani, your next door neighbour who just moved in a week ago. I moved to the building because it is closer to my workplace and would save my time travel as well as travel costs. I work with L'oreal which is three blocks away, in the Interface Towers. I really liked the lively neighnourhood as well, hence I chose this building.
This is the first time I am renting an apartment all by myself and it sure is a good reason to celebrate! Therefore, I am hosting a house warming party on this Saturday evening. I have invited my close friends and family only, who would be about seven of us. I am preparing dinner with wine and some fun music and obviously a dance session. This is what I have planned so far and I am really excited for it.
Since I am new in the building and also, you stay a hop, skip and jump away, I would really like for you to join us! It would be a grat ice breaker and so much fun! The party starts around 8pm. I am really looking forward to seeing you!
Yours faithfully,
Harbani Kaur Bhamra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 258, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e blocks away, in the Interface Towers. I really liked the lively neighnourhood a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, look, really, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2039800995 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28646887197 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0413754427 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166264492457 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607599206922 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679110483883 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907142673705 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227064985114 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.08 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.