Nowadays, people waste a lot of food that was brought from shops and restaurants.
Why do you think people waste food?
What can be done to solve this problem?
Food shortages are now no longer a challenge in most parts of the world. However, a new problem that emerges in our today’s society is the waste of food people buy from shops or order in restaurants. This essay will clarify the relevant causes of this phenomenon and considers some feasible measures to prevent this situation.
It is generally acknowledged that people’s living standards have been substantially enhanced all over the globe, leading to more prosperity and wealthier population who have more demand to satisfy themselves. There is no doubt that famine is not a common concept in today’s world where mass production combined with industrial agriculture using genetic engineering has boosted the productivity to feed the huge population. As a result, the vast majority of the population no longer struggle to buy basic food and they can enjoy a wide range of both locally-made food as well as imported food products. In some cases, people buy or order more than what they may consume and the simplest way to deal with food left behind is to throw it away. Vietnam is a case in point; about two or three decades ago when people still lived in poverty and hunger was a prevalent headache, food was treasured and hardly did people waste any food but this is now no longer the case. After a dinner at a luxurious restaurant with a fabulous setting, eating all the food or taking food left behind home seems to be a rare choice of people. Another explanation for this tendency is the fact that many young people are not aware of the true values of food or the hidden cost behind the food they eat on a daily basis.
With regard to the question of what steps we should take to prevent or at least discourage this practice, it is worth pointing out that education is by far the most effective solution. Only by educating people and raising their awareness can we make them realize how precious food is to our well-being and survival. The fact remains that famine is not a common phenomenon but kids in some third-world nations are still severely malnourished and many of them died because of starvation or the lack of quality food products. A comprehensive study conducted on a global scale reveals that the amount of food wasted every year from restaurants, shops, markets, malls and homes may feed a large number of kids in African nations and even save lives of thousands of people in need of food. No matter how easy it is for people to earn a living and to buy food, they should never waste what they take for granted since many other fellow human beings still need such foods to feed their hungry kids and dying aged parents.
By way of conclusion, despite the fact that we cannot totally eliminate this practice, relentless efforts should be made to change people’s frame of mind and attitude towards foods so that they will save food for their own sake and for the environment as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 567, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... a wide range of both locally-made food as well as imported food products. In some cases, ...
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Line 3, column 682, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...hops, markets, malls and homes may feed a large number of kids in African nations and even save l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, third, well, at least, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in some cases, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2401.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 510.0 315.596192385 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70784313725 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54831438208 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 176.041082164 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53137254902 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.9 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.450180697 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0625 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.875 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351243118147 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121594972479 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737171760388 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223163829084 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514828025408 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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