Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of that?
There is no gainsaying the fact that a major portion relating to the upliftment of developing countries is done multinational companies, as they find it suitable and reasonable to establish their offices in underdeveloped countries rather than their own. Although, them opening their outlets in poorer countries has certain benefits not only for them but also for the inhabitants of the country, there is no denying the fact that there are some minor drawbacks such as human rights violation and no job security as well.
To initiate with the benefits for the companies and also for the people. First and foremost, the advent of multinational companies in developing countries has increased the job prospects of many individual residing there. To be precise, the people of such countries found ample amount of work and were paid much better than they would elsewhere. In other words, they attained job satisfaction and it also led to an increased standard of living. For example, according to a survey conducted by Indian Census in 2010, after Amazon and Google opening their offices in Bangalore, the G.D.P of India rose to about 2% and the jobless ness decreased by 0.2% approximately. Moreover, should these multinationals have started their business in developed countries, they would not attain the fruits of cheap labor and increased work hours. Hence, the advantages that both of people and these companies gain are unsurmountable.
On the flip side, there are some issues that cannot be overlooked. Primarily, increasing work hours in 3rd world countries has become a source of benefit for the multinational sector, but it is taking a toll on the health of the people working for them. This is because such companies’ main motto is mass production, which requires time and in doing so they are abusing basic human rights of the locals. The Hindu, in its weekly magazine, posted an article saying that more and more were ripped of their basic rights of 5 days a week and were made to work extra-long hours on the pretense of more money. Second to this is the fact that there is a very minimal job security when it comes to working for such companies as for them humans are as dispensable as machines.
To reiterate, Although, there are these undeniable factors of human rights abuse and no job security; however, the vast benefits that come with the arrival of such multinational companies to a developing country cannot be denied as it not only boosts their economy but also serves for the needs of their people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, well, as for, for example, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97641509434 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75605744073 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495283018868 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8218422052 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.666666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2666666667 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208119955151 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784890302828 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729065854223 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133447597561 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049179006971 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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