Some people think that museums should be enjoyable place to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museum is to educate.
It is often argued that galleries should become entertaining places to feel pleasure, whilst others think that the aim of museums is to acquire particular knowledge. In my opinion, I believe that although such kind of places do not seem very interesting, they are full of educational developments.
On the one hand, museums are really considered as a means of learning and teaching. It means that we can get all kind of information including cultural, historical, as well as scientific and certainly, they are a home of education. Taking France as an example, in terms of size and number of places, the country is one of the most highly respectful one towards treasured objects. Museums, in there, take vitally important role in local people's live. Even the type of locations are considered as a part of fashion at the current time.
On the other hand, there are dissimilar views pointing to the idea above which should be taken into consideration. One crucial issue that the museums should be a location in which people can enjoy in a welcome manner. Namely, it can lead to increase the amount of art lovers consisting all aged groups. For instance, in my country, Uzbekistan, there is a museum in which types of arts are collected and people can watch them as well as nearby they can try themselves to imitate them.
In conclusion, while museums are considered as an educational place, they should also be enjoyable one. To my mind, an acquisition of particular knowledge from exhibits is the best way to learn.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88030888031 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81464798121 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9740590214 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2307692308 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321860183393 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102579862806 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111343773508 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184849410872 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073142532858 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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