During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about
A possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
* remind him when and where you met
* Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
* Say why you think you would be suitable for a job
Write at least 150 words. Begin your letter as dear...
Dear sir,
I am writing to let you know about my interest to work in your restaurant, since we had met in a plane proceeding towards London. we had shared some thoughts about the business conditions, now-a-days and challenges that the companies have been facing due to current pandemic. While exchanging our views you have offered me to join your company as my knowledge in this field is in accordance to the person you are looking for.
since we conversed, I was thinking to write a letter to remind you about that I am cordially willing to join your business as a manager.
I remain a feisty person and have a vast experience in management. I want to join your organization that will give me a chance to nourish my skills.
As you know, the companies are in dire of professionals and experienced employees I can assure you that my expertise will prove an asset for your company. As my skills are ver much in-line with your above mentioned position. Furthermore, I have gained 5 years of experience in managing chores in my current position, i am very good at time and stress management apart from that my higher authority admired my leadership style.
I am looking forward to hearing a positive response . Thanking in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...t in a plane proceeding towards London. we had shared some thoughts about the busi...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...e to the person you are looking for. since we conversed, I was thinking to write a...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e will prove an asset for your company. As my skills are ver much in-line with you...
^^
Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...managing chores in my current position, i am very good at time and stress managem...
^
Line 9, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...g forward to hearing a positive response . Thanking in anticipation. Yours fait...
^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng in anticipation. Yours faithfully,
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, so, while, apart from, mind you, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81651376147 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89741049803 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605504587156 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9255457431 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4545454545 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154547680782 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572525207933 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619532181459 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817958262218 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687178145311 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.