Write a Letter to your landlord apologizing for the inconvenience caused to him since you mentioned you would vacate on a particular date but was not able to find suitable accommodation Request an extension to stay in the house for an another month

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Write a Letter to your landlord apologizing for the inconvenience caused to him since you mentioned you would vacate on a particular date but was not able to find suitable accommodation.
Request an extension to stay in the house for an another month.

Dear Sir,

Please let me introduce myself, I am Vijay, one of your tenant who is currently living at your property in #13, Wallas apartment, 10 downing street, London. I had given a notice to vacate the property by 15th of december 2020 since my current employer has transferred my position to one of our branch in manchester which is 20 kilometers away from the residence.

Unfortunately, I couldn’t find an adequate accommodation that meets my basic needs in the neighbourhood of my new office. Hence, I would like to extend my stay at your premises for another month and I promise I will definitely find a new residence within this duration and leave the premises before 15th of January without fail. I profusely apologize for the inconvenience that is caused due to my extension. Also, please let me know if there are any financial loss that could impact your commitments because of extending stay at your apartment. I would like bear the charges and willing to pay the cost along with my rent.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon,

Your’s Faithfully,
Vijay,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'adequate accommodation'.
Suggestion: adequate accommodation
...nce. Unfortunately, I couldn’t find an adequate accommodation that meets my basic needs in the neighb...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: YOUR_S[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Your' or 'Yours'?
Suggestion: Your; Yours
...ng forward to hearing from you soon, Your’s Faithfully, Vijay,
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91847826087 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83451398267 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679347826087 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.923019943 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.125 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189112867123 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815181251536 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512172470375 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947131264277 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570258011979 0.0580467560999 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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