You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words
I agree both in different settings.
There are several advertisements that I am aware of, as I watched in television add and read in daily news paper, introduce us new products that in my opinion may well improve our lives. For example, an advertisement that post an advertisement with a decent offer for travel abroad including stay to a place someone desire to go long time but postponed in the past because of the high budget. In this case, such advertisement will provide an wonderful opportunity to fulfill his/her long time dream and the result may be that a heave sigh of relieve and satisfaction for the person or family who benefitted from this advertisement. This definitely will improve a social well being of the person or the family. So I agree that it is possible there are some business who advertise with real intent to offer a good benefits to its customer or sale the tour package at a reduced profit margin. These companies are not only improve their business it is also participating responsibly with society for a good cause.
In contrast other advertisements are encourages us to buy things that we really do not need.
For example, a FMCG company that produces pocket chips of poor quality and with harmful ingredients aimed to promote its sales by offers. The health of people, mainly children who buy in excess than usual will difinitly be affected as it increases the consumption and so the risk of getting ill. For this reason, it is in contrast to the earlier, few advertisements are not only encourages us to buy things that we really do not need, it is also make serious negative impact on health of children and so the parents in our society too affected.
In conclusion, people should be aware of and be able to identify the useful among many bad advertisements so that the company promote advertisement with wrong purpose fails.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...hed in television add and read in daily news paper, introduce us new products that in my o...
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Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'desires'.
Suggestion: desires
...broad including stay to a place someone desire to go long time but postponed in the pa...
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Line 2, column 440, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s case, such advertisement will provide an wonderful opportunity to fulfill his/he...
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Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sibly with society for a good cause. In contrast other advertisements are encour...
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Line 3, column 5, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...bly with society for a good cause. In contrast other advertisements are encourages us ...
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Line 4, column 446, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
... that we really do not need, it is also make serious negative impact on health of ch...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the useful among many bad advertisements so that the company promote advertisemen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78328173375 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84489971013 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557275541796 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8304132284 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.75 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231529852252 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925732424867 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107225681676 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151216512239 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12723656912 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.