Many criminals commit further crime as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
There are indeed more and more prisoners who commit the crime again. This problem must consist of several reasons. Therefore, in my point of view, the government should carry out particular methods to prevent this trend happening in society.
There are many reasons that lead to prisoners to keep committing crime after release from prison. Firstly, one of the most prevalent reasons is that prisoners have to face discrimination in life as no one prefers to employ who had the criminal record. This lead to a decrease in job opportunities. Moreover, they lack the encouragement as well as family's support. They feel lonely and hopelessness in life. These factors lead to a pessimistic outlook of them and directly or indirectly promote violence.
However, these problems can be avoided if it has the government's intervention as well as changes in people's outlook to these convicts. Instead of looking down on them, communities should create more job opportunities for them to get a stable salary. Also, constant psychology is also necessary which helps convicts and their family rebuild relationships. Last but not least, people should change their own mindset and attitude toward prisoners and encourage them both in physical and mental wellbeing to become responsible individuals.
In conclusion, although there is maintaining the number of factors which encourage convicts to commit the crime again, I am of the opinion that the government and community should give priority for them who desire to rehabilitate their life so as to prevent them from committing the crime again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...e problems can be avoided if it has the governments intervention as well as changes in peop...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...m who desire to rehabilitate their life so as to prevent them from committing the crime ...
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Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t them from committing the crime again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26877470356 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9054744233 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9422035037 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147650539968 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528983032727 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625449500424 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911410667295 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489015225211 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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