People continue to commit crimes even after being punished Why does this happen How can crime be prevented

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People continue to commit crimes even after being punished. Why does this happen? How can crime be prevented?

Submitted by dana_kass on Wed, 12/23/2020 - 11:23

There number of criminals who committed crimes, even after serving their sentences. This essay will discuss punishments are not capable of precluding crimes due to unemployment after being arrested and environment in the jail. Government should provide them with jobs to solve this.

Regarding the triggers of commitment of crime after being punished, it becomes harder to apply for a job for them, hence they are not able to make ends meet and move on to the greener pasture. This situation compels them to turn into crimes like theft and pick pocketing. What is more, in the jail so many people with negative background gather, so it has major impact on people’s attitude and mentality. In the other words, harsh nature of the prison and interactions with other prisoners changes individuals to the dark side. For instance, people, who had hurt somebody unintentionally and imprisoned, witnessing other’s behavior and deeds can get aggressive and it might lead to further crimes. So, there are couple of reasons why people reconvicts.

To tackle the aforementioned obstacles, several measures should be taken into consideration. First of all, the education for rehabilitation can assist returned convicts to obtain a job. If government provide prisoners with better attitude with practical skills during sentence, it would assist them earn a living. Moreover, companies may make an agreement with authorities, so they can employ people in the prison for works like sewing. That would help them to earn money until they release back to society.

Putting everything into consideration, poverty and influence of surrounding environment provoke them to commit the crime again, in order to solve this problem government should give them an opportunity to get knowledge or to work.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their sentences. This essay will discuss punishments are not capable of precludin...
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...of precluding crimes due to unemployment after being arrested and environment in ...
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...omes harder to apply for a job for them, hence they are not able to make ends me...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...b for them, hence they are not able to make ends meet and move on to the greene...
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Line 3, column 591, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, who had hurt somebody unintentionally and imprisoned, witnessing other’s beh...
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Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o had hurt somebody unintentionally and imprisoned, witnessing other’s behavior ...
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Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'skill'?
Suggestion: skill
...s with better attitude with a practical skills during sentence, it would assist them e...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, first of all, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32042253521 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88885866117 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630281690141 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8256515818 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.733333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233712472664 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745358427187 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663444982031 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150011577381 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779016400096 0.056905535591 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their sentences. This essay will discuss punishments are not capable of precludin...
^^
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of precluding crimes due to unemployment after being arrested and environment in ...
^^
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omes harder to apply for a job for them, hence they are not able to make ends me...
^^^
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...b for them, hence they are not able to make ends meet and move on to the greene...
^^
Line 3, column 591, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, who had hurt somebody unintentionally and imprisoned, witnessing other’s beh...
^^
Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o had hurt somebody unintentionally and imprisoned, witnessing other’s behavior ...
^^^
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'skill'?
Suggestion: skill
...s with better attitude with a practical skills during sentence, it would assist them e...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, first of all, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32042253521 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88885866117 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630281690141 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8256515818 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.733333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233712472664 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745358427187 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663444982031 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150011577381 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779016400096 0.056905535591 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.