The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people born in these countries live.
The given pie chart and table respectively highlight the proportion of people with different nationalities residing in Australia in terms of their country of origin and their distribution in cities and rural areas.
Looking from an overall perspective, the majority of citizens living in Australia is indigenous. Regardless of their country of birth, the population of Australia distributed mostly in metropolises
As illustrated in the pie chart, three-quarters of people living in Australia is the locals, which is nearly 7 times greater when compared to citizens from the UK. As for people migrating from New Zealand, China and Netherland to Australia, they constitute merely 3%, 2% and 1% of the total population of Australia, accordingly. Ultimately, the other ethnic groups made up nearly one-fourth of Australia's population
Concerning the distribution of people, most of them living in cities. However, although made up merely 2% of the population, up to 99% of Chinese Australian are living in the urban regions throughout Australia. On the contrary, even though they took the largest share of the population, only 83% of people living in cities were native Australia. Meanwhile, approximately 9 out of 10 people from the Netherlands and the UK is living in cities. As for New Zealand, 80% of New Zealand-borns Australia are urban dwellers.
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- Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tive Australia. Meanwhile, approximately 9 out of 10 people from the Netherlands ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, look, well, while, as for, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38028169014 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20405251559 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539906103286 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6543553546 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336390939881 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136765339038 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672107607045 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201976203942 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00912961110723 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.