Young people in modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation.
Why is this case?
What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people?
In modern societies have more young peoples than older people in important roles. It means youngsters are stronger than previous generation.
To begin with one of the reasons this phenomenon our century is digital and technology entered to every sector. Older people try and learn these technologies but sometimes they can not afford it. In addition, world population is growing and it require every individual more work, more invest and read new subjects. Young people have a lot of time for this and they aware of future jobs and secrets. While older generations spare time with family, relatives and friends. There are also another reason, young people are very eager for new things, motivated for difficult situations and they want more benefit for their team. For example, if there are one not solved problem old generation satisfy with their achievement. But not young generation, because they have not any success and they want it. And all these are supported by young generation and important roles are given them.
On the contrary this trend gives our society new impact on our relationship between young and old generation. Firstly, some youngsters do not respect old generation for slow working or other things. Secondly, new generations have not care for their families because of their passion on work.
In conclusion, we can say old generation have more power and influence because of changing and developing world. And it create new habits in youngsters behavior.
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Suggestion: try to
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Suggestion: requires
...ion, world population is growing and it require every individual more work, more invest...
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Suggestion: cared
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Suggestion: creates
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...eate new habits in youngsters behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14937759336 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58166657885 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572614107884 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3759615195 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5625 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384617618316 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120458001398 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101571357867 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244080275401 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06584383976 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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