Today, the various incentives now for the women are thought to have a negative effect than the benefits it has. It is thought by many people. But, in my opinion, I disagree with it.
The positives are so many that it overshadows the negatives for me. Firstly, today’s woman is working in the big organisations shoulder-to-shoulder with men, thus, breaking the patriarchal approach which existed in the olden times. Therefore, creating Work Equality for both genders in terms of salary and job positions. Leading to being self-sufficienct.Secondly, the women today is breaking all the stereotypical norms which existed possibly two decades back that is working late in the organisation, which earlier thought of to be a taboo now the females are practicing it normally. For instance, pilot jobs may require women to work on odd hours and men today are sensitive to the career needs of a women. This in turn, has made the women more goal oriented than ever. Lastly, the self awareness has made women know their worth as they don’t endorse any toxic behaviour l towards them, leading to a strong independent women. Moreover, since the working opportunities have increased because of the female participation this has lead to an increase in the country’s income too because it has more taxpayers now with regards to earlier.
However, a few people still believe that giving opportunities to the women may be consequential like, they think women may not be able to have a correct work-life balance which could affect their relationships. Also, few believe if they become self-sufficient and career driven they may not endorse the idea of marriage and this could have an affect on the society.
To conclude, the opportunities that are considered as perks today for women have always existed for men and this can never be problematic but subjective to one’s own opinion.
- People should be encouraged to do leisure activities such as mountain climbing or sailing alone round the world even though these activities may be dangerous because this will help to develop their courage and confidence To what extent do you agree or dis 83
- To learn a foreign language successfully you need to spend time in the country where the language is spoken Do you agree or disagree
- Nowadays there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past Some people think this situation has cause more problems than it has solved What are your opinions on this 73
- To learn a foreign language successfully you need to spend time in the country where the language is spoken Do you agree or disagree 64
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Secondly
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Suggestion: a woman; women
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Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...s them, leading to a strong independent women. Moreover, since the working opportunit...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...idea of marriage and this could have an affect on the society. To conclude, the opport...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08737864078 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14805731674 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.909340826 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.285714286 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204941958423 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750997083303 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745017138735 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128513868755 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322144821793 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.