It is sometimes believed that people with good calculating skills will have more chance to succeed in their business. However, I think this perspective is to some degree dated, and there are also many other aspects deciding the final outcomes.
On the one hand, it is somewhat advantageous for those who are good at calculating because they can give faster results than those who are not. Nonetheless, the advancement of technology has fundamentally improved the way people do works relating to maths. For example, with the help of numerous computer software and calculators, not only can we solve mathematical problems quickly but we are also able to plan business strategies accurately. Therefore, it seems rather old-fashioned to me to think that a person needs to know maths to be successful in his or her career.
More importantly, there are several determining factors for the prosperity of an enterprise besides maths. Firstly, companies are ultimately responsible for the quality of their products or services, and they need to guarantee that all the things supplied to the customers are good if they want to survive and proliferate in the market. Communications skills are another crucial element which constitutes a successful business. It can be said that smooth and comprehensible information transferred between employees or between suppliers and customers can enhance the productivity, hence better profits. In addition, various objective impacts such as global economic recession, extreme weather conditions, or epidemics might also impair the achievement of a business. The Covid-19 pandemic has catastrophically affected millions of enterprises in the world, and maths does not seems to be useful for many owners.
Generally, maths is useful but being successful necessitates other merits such as good products, good customer service skills or even some lucks.
- Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree 90
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 92
- Some people believe that government should take care of old people and provide financial support after they retire Others say individual should save during their working years to fund their own retirement What is your opinion Give reasons for your answer 84
- Task 2 To succeed in a business one needs to know maths To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 877, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
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Line 5, column 877, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, even so, for example, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48453608247 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1095764029 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625429553265 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1346921439 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.088467365629 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275307307339 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308769745385 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.049314148888 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350654483218 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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