Nowadays people are spending increasingly large amounts of money on their wedding parties. Many people feel large and expensive weddings cause some problems for the bride and groom. Do u agree? Use personal examples in your response.
Exorbitant wedding ceremonies are largely becoming the norm of the society. This current trend has set the standard for intending couples on how to plan their wedding parties. I strongly agree that these kind of parties cause some problems for the bride and groom. Analyzing the huge debts some couples run into after the occasion and the financial difficulties they face going forward will show this.
Firstly, many couples nowadays are left with huge debts after the marriage ceremony is done. For instance, my cousin obtained a huge loan from the bank to meet up with the demands of a destination wedding. This was due to the pressure he faced from his bride and family who wanted to jet out to Dubai where the occasion was held. Consequently, he faced many difficulties thereafter as he was not able to pay back the loan within the stipulated time. Hence, this line of thought is considered true.
Secondly, it is difficult for some couples to find a proper financial balance right after their parties. For example, a friend of mine experienced some issues in paying bills few months later. His event was the most talked about on social media for weeks. There was a huge reception party and many celebrities were in attendance. It took a long time for the newlyweds to enjoy their marriage because of the many expenses. This also supports the notion that expensive weddings cause problems for couples.
As clearly illustrated above, the problems caused by expensive weddings, couples should be encouraged to cut their coat according to their cloth. Also, not to give in to the pressure from social media, friends and especially family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... wedding parties. I strongly agree that these kind of parties cause some problems for the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95306859206 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52263663733 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606498194946 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9912095272 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7058823529 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228258618921 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753898496659 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722840397926 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140643140468 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764259142808 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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