You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
You should write at least 250 words.
It is noticed widely that rules and laws has been an importan methods for governments to prevent their residents from violating sinful acts and if there were nothing to control the individuals from behaving badly in the society, our commnity could develop in an abnormal way and even collapse. Therefor, i highly appreciate the statement suppose that society is based on laws and rules due to the facts accentuated below.
Firstly, law is used to regulate human behavior and maintain social order so if the laws were not applied our society could not be etablished. The law has long helped to manage society, the person who contravenes it will accountable to their lapses depend on how serious their sins are. The law also help people in a country to know about their basic rights and obligations so that they can adjust their behaviors in a suitable way. For example, residents can use their rights to denounce those who engage in infringement of their legitimate interests.
In addition, laws also contribute to the development of a country. The country having a strict law could be an appealing destination for the international investors since it can create the secure atmosphere for the business and grab the attention for investing more captial in the that country. Moreover, the country without limitation would be a horrified prospect for residents who always live in the fearfull situation, as a result, they ability and productivity could not be performed impeccably which is extremely scathing for both of them and company.
To sum up, laws and rules play the important role in not only the ancient society but also in the modern community since it can control the behaviors of the residents and attract the investment outside. Had the laws and rules not been invented, our society could not develop as it nowadays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an abnormal way" with adverb for "abnormal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...the society, our commnity could develop in an abnormal way and even collapse. Therefor, i highly a...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a suitable way" with adverb for "suitable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...so that they can adjust their behaviors in a suitable way. For example, residents can use their r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71736693234 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542483660131 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6649549119 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.090909091 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108695682607 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507914115688 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349451879861 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741692030017 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266911134535 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.