Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary

Votes
Average: 6.3 (2 votes)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 382, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...I strongly disagree with the statement. Some of the people want to explore their ability by...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...oney to sustenance enough their family. Some of the dedicated towards their work, they want...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: ABOUT_WHO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'about whom to'?
Suggestion: about whom to
... not think about money. They only think about who to make children future bright and help pe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vital part of life but not every time. I strongly disagree with the statement tha...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 439.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67653758542 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3211096221 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444191343964 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7780134635 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3181818182 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9545454545 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86363636364 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121941007342 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546533906854 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648984271791 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922617566039 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673381098872 0.056905535591 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.