The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So governments and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment.
Increasing environmental issues has become a cause for concern for public organization and government. Nowadays the surrounding complication is growing exceedingly such that the common people have no control over it so it is now in the hands of government and popular companies to eradicate the tragic consequences. This essay scrutinizes on both views before arriving to a rational conclusion. I completely agree with this perception
Extensive use of carbon emissions and plastics affect the surroundings in various ways. What's more? When carbon contents are excessively emitted from the industries or public transports there is a significant impact in the rate of ozone layer depletion. Furthermore, too many use of plastics has an adverse effect in the marine life as the plastic recycling process is currently not operative . According to some experts 60% of environmental damage are caused due to headless governmental regulation towards environmental conservation.
In stark contrast, there is a significant profit from the use of fossil fuels to the government. Adding to this, these profits have made the municipality economically strong in such a way that public transports has become an affordable ride for the poverished . On a particular note government should impose stringent regulation over the use of carbon emissions. Moreover battery mode of transportation should be encouraged globally. The individuals should learn to dispose the plastic in their respective recycle area. Many popular companies should invest in bamboo usage as an replacement for plastic . This would considerably reduce the use of plastic and save Marine diversity. For instance researchers suggest that over 6% of the country's population are very considerate towards environment by using battery vehicles and bamboo utensils.
To conclude , i completely agree that current environmental issues should be shouldered by government and large firms which would change the present scenario and improve lifestyle. There is a prospective future when the society becomes environment cautious.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...ffect the surroundings in various ways. Whats more? When carbon contents are excessiv...
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Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun use seems to be countable; consider using: 'many uses'.
Suggestion: many uses
...ozone layer depletion. Furthermore, too many use of plastics has an adverse effect in th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 393, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cling process is currently not operative . According to some experts 60% of enviro...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...me an affordable ride for the poverished . On a particular note government should ...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...particular note government should impose stringent regulation over the use of car...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ation over the use of carbon emissions. Moreover battery mode of transportation should b...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 577, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...panies should invest in bamboo usage as an replacement for plastic . This would co...
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Line 3, column 603, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mboo usage as an replacement for plastic . This would considerably reduce the use ...
^^
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cles and bamboo utensils. To conclude , i completely agree that current environ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68167202572 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21940763774 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601286173633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5809900831 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.941176471 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152968182051 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427574398687 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484442373542 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952643546654 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393426739784 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...ffect the surroundings in various ways. Whats more? When carbon contents are excessiv...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun use seems to be countable; consider using: 'many uses'.
Suggestion: many uses
...ozone layer depletion. Furthermore, too many use of plastics has an adverse effect in th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 393, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cling process is currently not operative . According to some experts 60% of enviro...
^^
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...me an affordable ride for the poverished . On a particular note government should ...
^^
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...particular note government should impose stringent regulation over the use of car...
^^
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ation over the use of carbon emissions. Moreover battery mode of transportation should b...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 577, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...panies should invest in bamboo usage as an replacement for plastic . This would co...
^^
Line 3, column 603, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mboo usage as an replacement for plastic . This would considerably reduce the use ...
^^
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cles and bamboo utensils. To conclude , i completely agree that current environ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68167202572 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21940763774 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601286173633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5809900831 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.941176471 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152968182051 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427574398687 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484442373542 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952643546654 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393426739784 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.